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Post by Kabob on Dec 4, 2005 16:41:50 GMT -5
because i don't...maybe I will later...tomorrow....next week.....someday
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Post by Kabob on Dec 4, 2005 17:02:39 GMT -5
later is now....I have joined
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Post by Cyrus Knight on Dec 5, 2005 11:55:11 GMT -5
k sweet...
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sircrono
Guardia Farmer
I am yet another person longing for a purpose in life.
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Post by sircrono on Dec 18, 2005 22:03:46 GMT -5
I think I can help. I can help edit.
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sircrono
Guardia Farmer
I am yet another person longing for a purpose in life.
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Post by sircrono on Dec 18, 2005 22:06:19 GMT -5
hmmmmm, ur demo chapters need a lot of work. I see you as struggling when I was like 14 years old. You have it all pictured in your mind. But when it comes to jotting it down. You don't have a clue. just do it like you would when you picture it in mind. It will take a while but it should be worth it.
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Post by Cyrus Knight on Dec 21, 2005 19:44:43 GMT -5
I'll keep that in mind. Ummm editing wise grab a chunk of the story and edit, revise, do what ever. I've said a million times.
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Post by crono as glenn on Feb 25, 2006 15:15:04 GMT -5
Hello I'm Crono as Glenn from Chrono Crisis im makeing a Biography of Masa and Mune and i will have a chapter of when Cyrus owned the Sword maby we can work togerher on that part
in chapter one i notised that i said that Gaurdina is at war with the humans dont you mean the mysitcs (. They were known as Mystics in the kingdom of Guardia) you mean medina right (, he knew that Guardia were at peace with the humans. )
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Post by Cyrus Knight on Feb 28, 2006 15:12:01 GMT -5
yes there is a mistake in there, my editor and revisor messed up. but anyway that's intresting about ur idea about a biography on masa & mune. I love to help you could e-mail me with ur Ideas or whatever you have down. Then i could jot down my thoughts, type it up and send it to you. my e-mail is ctmuzicman@yahoo.com. Or we can aim eachother. Mine is ctmuzicman . btw do u know whats wrong with the website at CC. J/W.
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Post by crono as glenn on Feb 28, 2006 18:21:52 GMT -5
hears my web sight s11.invisionfree.com/Masa_and_Munes_tale/index.php?http://s11.invisionfree.com/Masa_and_Munes_tale/Schala from chrono crisis fourms helped me out you regester and i'll send you a measage in your personal mesanger about the chapters i like what you gave of cyrus's first person biography it very well done i dont think mine will be good as yours though because im only 13 and according to cc fourms it look like youll be turnig 16 in june im done with chapter one and Schala revised it ( that girl can give alot of construive critisim
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Post by Cyrus Knight on Feb 28, 2006 22:54:49 GMT -5
well don't critisis your writing abilities about ur age, I'm sure you do good job. btw thanks for the complement. so i guess u don't know what's wrong with the forums
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Post by crono as glenn on Feb 28, 2006 23:09:50 GMT -5
are you talking about the fourms page or Crisis.com because Crisis.com is not working Chains said he'll probaly make new sight the fourms page is fine what the btw stand for is it by the way? cause thats what i think it means you'll need to regester as a member before vewing the fourms page Guest not allowed on fourm page
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Post by Cyrus Knight on Mar 1, 2006 18:25:17 GMT -5
yea it means by the way
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schala
Guardia Farmer
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Post by schala on Mar 2, 2006 7:29:24 GMT -5
As dune said, I'm currently the unofficial editor of his project. I'm a college student who has had a lot of english classes under my belt and am currently taking a literature class, so I'm pretty good at catching grammar mistakes. I'm also an avid Chrono fan of about 4 years now, so I'm familiar with the people and events in the stories. It seems that you already have alot of editors already, but I'd be willing to help if you want me to.
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Post by Cyrus Knight on Mar 2, 2006 15:07:21 GMT -5
well I only have one, the other editors don't really reply to my e-mails when I'm asking hows it going. So I have no clue whats going on with them. but uhhh, That'd be great if you would like to help out as well...
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Post by crono as glenn on Mar 2, 2006 23:20:06 GMT -5
Schala I thank you for all your help you said my thing looks a little like an essay well I asked my teacher and she said the only wrighting assingments are essays not stories so I try my best to make it look like a story not an essay
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